Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about your service. I am your frequent costumer, and so far my experience was excellent, however, the incident happened last week spoiled the image of your restaurant.
Let me explain the issue in detail. It was last Friday evening me and family suddenly planned to have dinner at your restaurant, and I booked a table over the phone, after reaching there we had made an order for Chinese food.
Once our order has been offered to us we found food was not prepared properly, also spices quantity was extremely high.
We complained about it, but your staff was not listening any this about this matter, later we informed to the manager and he committed us to server same disc without any extra charge .
However, When we had our dinner and asked for the bill, waiter gave us bill which included two items , and when we shout about it none of your staff member were co-operate with us. Finally, we paid mentioned amount.
As I mentioned it was horrible experience for my family, I would like you to take appropriate action on this, and also I want refund of extra money which I paid.
Hope you will take appropriate action on my concern, else I will file a complaint against your service to consumer court.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
...erver same disc without any extra charge . However, When we had our dinner and as...
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
...er gave us bill which included two items , and when we shout about it none of your...
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: WERE_VBB
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...hout about it none of your staff member were co-operate with us. Finally, we paid me...
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: ''.
...about it none of your staff member were co-operate with us. Finally, we paid mentioned amo...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73593073593 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52360515021 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65367965368 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5941356048 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149005414804 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052148161648 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306945972008 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062489383403 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354574627897 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.