You use trains to reach office but the timetable of the train has been changed recently. Write a letter to railway authorities for the revised timetable, and the train you take to work no longer stops at your station.
In your letter:
introduce yourself
what are the problems caused due to the changes
what you suggest them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Rakesh Kumar Soni, resident of Charni Road (Mumbai) regularly use your train to commute to and from my office. The recent changes in train schedule is causing lot of sufferings for commuters like me and I hope if you could consider in revision of timetable.
Let me explain my situation in more details. I work for a construction company and several other officers follows the same schedule as mine to reach the work place. I used to take one of your trains at 7:50am from Charni Road and usually reach the destination by 8:30am in morning. The train drops me at Andheri Station which is very to near to my office at a walk-able distance.
Sadly, due to recent changes in train schedule the train now no longer stops at Andheri Station, instead it stops at Bhayendar station which is almost 20km from Andheri. As a result we need to travel few extra miles to reach our office and that too when the rush from Bhayendar coming to Andheri side is at the peak level. Almost all buses and trains are overcrowded. Unfortunately, many commuters like me reach late to office which is directly affecting to our productivity. Consequently everyone is upset with your service.
I request you to please revised the timetable and reinstate the 7:50 AM’s train to stop Andheri station, which will enable me and my fellow passenger to reach their workplace on time.
Yours Faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 477, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...directly affecting to our productivity. Consequently everyone is upset with your service. ...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stopping
... and reinstate the 7:50 AM's train to stop Andheri station, which will enable me a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82040816327 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60856245548 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7158791439 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8461538462 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373150436898 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123985131517 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730962338355 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226828598091 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228748328978 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.