Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to introduce you my friend Mr Suresh Mehta , for the vacant post of public relationship manager in our company.
Allow me to explain, Mr Suresh and I had studied MBA together from United business institute, Brussels.Because of his resilience he was part of many public speaking events during our post graduation.furthermore, he earned many certificates of excellency in counselling sessions.
He has an tremendous amount of experience as public dealing . He worked for 7 years in Amazon as Team leader in customer grievance department.Due to some personal issues he left his job and in urgent need of the same.
In my opinion he is the best fit for this position in our company as our company needs to attract good number of public for it's products and benefits for long term.
Hope to hearing from you soon the appropriate reply.please do not hesitate to call me if you want any more information about him.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
CHHAVI ARORA.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02395209581 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1970409273 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4171419427 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169514330445 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880726560707 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779410295129 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808732401501 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766334592099 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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