You want to take a holiday in another country. During your holiday you would like to meet one of your friends who lives there.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• describe the types of place you would like to visit
• ask some questions about accommodation
• suggest some activities you could do together
Dear Michael,
I am writing to tell you that I will go to Orlando on the next holiday. Are you there on July 4th??
I intend to go to Disney, Universal and Sea World Parks. What do you think about these parks? Do you recommend another good theme parks? Beyond this, What I can do more in Orlando? If you can go with me, I certainly will love to be there with your company. And if you have other suggestions, please tell me about it.
Another question that I want to know is about accommodation. I don’t know yet if I will be in Disney’s resort or in the hotel at International Drive. What do you think about? Which one is better?
If you don’t want to or can’t go to the parks with me, we can go for a good restaurant, or you can show me other things that you consider interesting. The most important thing will be meet you.
All the best,
Mônica
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Michael, I am writing to tell you that I will go ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35151515152 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60913138321 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8903267686 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 47.8666666667 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 4.34317383033 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218780428769 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083703658958 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051466001627 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14795945318 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199012560613 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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