You want to work in another country. write a letter to your friend live in that country. tell him you want to get a job. give your details, ask for additional information.
Dear John,
As you know, I have been working in India for 5 years as a senior executive with one of the leading MNC. I'm writing to you as I'm looking for some excellent opportunities to present my skills in Canada.
I'm 32 years old and a Chartered Accountant, and head of Corporate Accounts & Tax department handling a portfolio of around 10 clients, with a team of 15 people. Now after being part of this MNC from many years I want to shift at a global platform, where I can enhance my career graph.
Also, revert me with the details about the working hour, leave policy and pay scale as soon as possible, so I can make my decision affirm.
Your's Faithfully,
Bhavesh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 557.0 937.175257732 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 206.0 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52845528455 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57169567143 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731707317073 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 290.88556701 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3651455274 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121859923703 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633005616586 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044573732401 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640663983724 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559850512679 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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