Dear Sir,
I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain information about accommodation in London.
I am going to study at London University for my Masters degree next month and will therefore stay in the city for one year. Since my wife will come with me, the accommodation that London University has offered me might not be suited.
We are seeking accommodation that is just a short bus ride away from London University or even within walking distance, and is situated in areas where there is a relatively good supply of living goods. Besides, our ideal apartment might include a bed, wardrobe, study desk and lamp, dining table, and telephone. In particular, we need a kitchen which is fully equipped with a refrigerator, microwave oven, cook top, kettle, toaster, and cooking and dining utensils.
I will arrive in London at the end of this month, so I would be much obliged to you if you could recommend several accommodations I am looking for.
Your prompt and favourable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
James Thompson
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, may, so, therefore, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95628415301 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.855043529 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.790872086 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283423093196 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103983470029 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110469239234 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165789298062 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125049494755 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.