You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.-ask them for help finding accommodation-tell them where you would like to live-tell them the type of place you are looking for

Dear John,

Hope my letter will find you in the warmth of life and wealth. I’m writing this letter to ask a favour of finding me a place to live in New Delhi.

Let me explain to you in details. As you know, I have been trying to shift to Delhi for some time now. Fortunately, I got an opportunity this time, as a counsellor at Digamber College, near Vasant Vihar. They are asking me to join really soon and I have little acquaintance with the area. Hence, finding a decent and reasonable place seems to be a little difficult for me. However, I remember you are there for two years now. So, do u mind helping me with this?

As mentioned earlier, I’m joining as a counsellor, thus a sound sleep is much needed to stay calm and relaxed at work. For the same, a quiet location which is away from the unnecessary rumble is what I’ll prefer more. Not to forget, the commuting time to the college also needs to be taken care of.

A single occupancy flat with decent amenities in it and a kitchen in the working situation is all I need.

I sincerely present my apologies for the inconvenience my request will bring to you and thank you for your all time support.

Awaiting for your reply.

Love,
Neha.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...thank you for your all time support. Awaiting for your reply. Love, Neha.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48924664347 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4100939089 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287207901264 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884992119455 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806168648377 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136317961126 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856215022254 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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