You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
Ask them for help finding accommodation.
Tell them where you would like to live.
Tell them the type of place you are looking for.
Dear Peter,
Hey buddy! How are you? I am writing to tell you about my promotion in your city London.
You will be happy to hear that I am promoted to next position of Senior Analyst in my bank The Royal Bank of Scotland in London branch. I was considered as strongest contestent for this role. As I am moving to your city, I would require accommodation from the next month and you are going to help me in finding that.
My office is in the South Hall area, any place near to this will be better for me to commute to and from my office. I will not have any personal convenience, so accommodation in my office vicinity would be preferred.
I am moving with my wife and your niece. So I would like to have an independent flat to live. It should be fully furnished as I am not taking any of home appliance along. I do not need parking, but the small kitchen garden would be appriciated as my wife loves to grow vegetables.
If you need any further details, call me at my nubmer: 9501133847.
Hope to meet you soon.
With love,
Patrick Smith.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Peter, Hey buddy! How are you? I am writing to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34848484848 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5177058953 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0247222369 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200339182441 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740296007089 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492464090355 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118503137077 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476066373483 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.