You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department.
Write a letter to your employer. In the letter
• ask to be considered for this job
• explain why you would be a suitable candidate
• outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make
Dear Mr. Green,
I am writing to thank you for your recent decision to employ a supervisor to enhance seals department performance and flexibility.
I think that I can be a good candidate for this job position and I appreciate if you consider me about this role.
I studied business management at the university and I have 10 years’ experiences as a senior manager assistant. Some current processes that are using in our company were designed by me in two last years that improved our seals' network in other countries as you can check.
If you put me in this job position, I will make many changes in our department. For instance, I will learn our seals’ staff by myself in over the work days, I will use updated programs to organize our department better than it was and etc.
I really appreciate you if you consider me, I will never disappoint you, if you chose me.
Yours faithfully.
Ebrahim Samarej
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...anize our department better than it was and etc. I really appreciate you if you conside...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73291925466 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83651750658 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5852629217 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285532261771 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117403122807 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876960901454 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162920211402 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077426000806 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.