You work for a company and have recently decided to leave your current employment Write a letter to your employer In your letter explain why you are writing explain why you have decided to leave the company tell your employer what you plan to do after lea

Essay topics:

You work for a company and have recently decided to leave your current employment.
Write a letter to your employer. In your letter

explain why you are writing
explain why you have decided to leave the company
tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment.

Dear Mr Shah,

I am writing this letter to disclose to you that I have decided to resign from my position as Sales Manager within your company.

As you are aware, last month I tied the knot with my husband who is well settled in The New York. Now that I have to move there as well, I have decided to discontinue my work here. I have always enjoyed working with this company, and have learnt a lot about marketing and sales strategies. My colleagues and bosses have been wonderful to work with, and I have acquired a set of skills from each one of them.

It has been a pleasure to join this company, and I hope that you will be able to provide me with a letter of reference so that I can attach it with my future job applications in the New York. If you could let me have that by the end of this, that would be lovely, as I will be leaving for the New York by the end of that week.

I look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours sincerely,
James Smith

Votes
Average: 6.3 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13227513228 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20982938956 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.82323419 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272081805119 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120143244902 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498581446987 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163578923486 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558457411127 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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