You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
- explain why you took the job
- describe the problems that you experienced
- suggest what could be done about them
Dear Mr Harris,
I am currently working part-time on the factory floor of your company. I appreciated working for your company, but I feel that I must bring a critical issue to your attention.
Firstly, when I was interviewed and given a job here, I was told that my responsibilities would be purely administrative. In other words, I was informed that I would be working in an office environment rather than on the factory floor. But when I arrived for my first day of the work, I was asked to work in the factory just for one day to cover for an absent worker. And, I have now there for over a week.
Whenever I question a supervisor about this, they claim not to know about my position in the office. It is illegal and unethical now to force me to work in other areas without disclosing it at the joining time, as I was offered a different post at the time of the interview. Additionally, I am unable to carry out any labour duties any further due to strain in my back. I would like you to investigate this matter, and rectify the situation as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
James Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, as to, i feel, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76068938776 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5212564245 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164454441078 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580985297147 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446554048273 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10542214838 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504255339127 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.