You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your wo

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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Write at least 150 words.

Dear Rahul,
I am writing to draw your immediate attention to the Laptop problem I am facing nowadays. When the lockdown was initiated in the month of March, we are asked to work from home. The laptop provided to me was old, from from the existing stock we had. Recently, the keypad of the computer has started malfunctioning.
I have to rely on mobile to work, which is quite frustrating. Moreover, the reply to the clients are getting delivered late, as working on mobile is not that efficient when compared with a laptop. Additionally, we were not able to submit the tender on scheduled due to this problem, which is going to cost a business loss to our company.
I request you to get this laptop repaired on immediate notice, to avoid any further deficit to our company. Till then arrange for another computer for the time being so that my work is not affected and can continue working from home. Let me know, to whom shall I handover this laptop to and from where to collect the new one.
I am waiting for your immediate response.

Yours sincerely,
Shreyas Parab

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...ome. The laptop provided to me was old, from from the existing stock we had. Recently, th...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6387434555 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55508110667 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9242415784 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198559585034 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685527123515 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448283055407 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112022812123 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152913859759 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...ome. The laptop provided to me was old, from from the existing stock we had. Recently, th...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6387434555 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55508110667 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9242415784 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198559585034 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685527123515 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448283055407 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112022812123 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152913859759 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.