Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Computer and its technology have become prominent in everyone's life. It would be unjustifiable to say that computer technology does not surround us. Nowadays, most of our activities are entirely reliable on computers due to their fast, efficient working, without the aid of human beings. Nevertheless, some part of society is afraid of children getting exposed to the lousy use of computers.
The computer holds a predominant position in this highly advanced technological milieu. Firstly, most of the business are choosing online platforms for fulfilling the needs of the customers. For example, Flipkart, Amazon holds a more significant market share when compared to retail shops. Moreover, remote banking and transactions are now possible because of the reliability of the computers and have reduced the stress of standing in the long queue or maintaining a large bunch of paper files.
As a matter of fact, during the COVID situation, the people who had good hands-on computers were away from the fear of unemployment. People realised that, to not only learn the basics of using their computers but also to learn the courses and upgrade their skills without any need of visiting the classes. For example, the online tutoring websites were prosperous in the pandemic. White hat junior which tutors computer programming to young children have prooved them successful; including other platforms BYJUS, Udemy, from where children can learn regarding curriculum education along with upgrading their skills like painting, dancing, learning new languages, cooking at a very worthy cost.
Every coin has two sides; there are lots of content or pictures which should not be exposed to the children using computers. These websites can be very vulnerable for the young minds, but this can be controlled by implementing firewall security and parental control settings, which can restrict the children from visiting those portals or getting to know about the terrible side of the computer.
I strong cannot entirely agree that computer can be harmful to children, with the help of software parents can restrict the awful usages and can also guide them by providing the right educational knowledge about the usages of the computer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, for example, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32386363636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73242293072 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8456648844 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.933333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183888578488 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553623852978 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252232474066 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09642765926 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142976110113 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.