You agreed to take a job over the summer but due to some unexpected problems you can no longer take the position Write a letter to the manager In your letter Apologise for not being able to take the job Explain your situation Covid19 stuck in India WFH tr

Essay topics:

You agreed to take a job over the summer, but due to some unexpected problems, you can no longer take the position. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
• Apologise for not being able to take the job
• Explain your situation - Covid19- stuck in India - WFH - travel restrictions
• Say that you would be interested in the position next summer

Dear Mr Smith,
I hope you are in the pink of your health during this Covid19 situation. Thank you for accepting my job application. Due to the Covid19 condition, joining this summer will not be possible, and I sincerely apologise for that.
Last month I came to India to my hometown, to avoid taking leaves after joining the prestige position. As the number of positive corona cases is on the surge, the lockdown has been imposed. It is estimated that there will be international travel restrictions for at least six coming months. Since the situations are uncertain globally, the present company privileged us with work from home; until the situation gets better, it is difficult to get back to Canada.
However, if permissible I would like to join the position by next summer, as this jobs involved a lot of travelling; in this pandemic scenario, it is advisable not to travel much to restrict the increase in the number of corona cases.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
Shreyas Parab

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95294117647 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80037071199 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4764416943 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225975921199 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794235308355 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446310644492 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111067484833 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774000400035 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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