Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to report an issue with my laptop's touch-pad. The touch-pad does not seems to be responsive while I try to use the laptop.
Let me explain the situation in detail. I was assigned a critical project because of the upcoming audits in our company. Therefore, I had requested a laptop, so I can work from home and complete the assignments in time. Moreover, due to a dis-functional machine, it has become quite difficult to complete my tasks.
I would like to request a new laptop or a replacement as soon as possible. Alternatively, you can provide me with an optical mouse until this issue is fixed. I believe my manager should provide an approval for this.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Sam Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...ptops touch-pad. The touch-pad does not seems to be responsive while I try to use the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...ptops touch-pad. The touch-pad does not seems to be responsive while I try to use the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 648.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83582089552 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90592837017 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738805970149 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0770114287 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.9090909091 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1818181818 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133344554503 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463439994411 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377628027322 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719453340632 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225134631829 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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