You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a problem with a gadget which I bought from your shop last month.
The device is a Microsoft tablet. It was a complete package, including a protective screen and a typing cover, and it is supplied with an additional battery. When I use the tablet for continues long hours, the battery gets heated up and shuts down automatically. I tried on several times to control its temperature by an external fan, but it did not work out.
Recently, I have signed a new contract with a large company as a freelancer, and I have certain commitments to deliver their work. These require high-feature applications which are provided only by this tablet. Therefore, any problem occurs to the tablet, it will affect my work progress and committed delivery dates.
I have a comprehensive warranty contract with your shop. It states that all problems are covered during the first year of purchase. I would therefore request that you treat this matter personally with your service department, and that you ensure it is fixed as soon as possible.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81899629807 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7613183001 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6923076923 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33184939533 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964223144077 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633945414881 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165931605791 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07479754235 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.