You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
* describe the problem with the equipment
* explain how this problem is affecting your work
* say what you want the shop or company to do.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Yesterday I bought a Dell laptop in your shop to support my job from home. After reaching home I installed the required software necessary to support my work. Unfortunately, the microphone inbuilt is not working properly. I am extremely disappointed to see my brand new item not serving the purpose.
While discussing with your salesperson I made it clear that I need the piece to carry out my job from my residence. In next two days I have a teleconference call scheduled with team and my boss. When I made a test call I discovered that my voice is not recognized, and I bought it for the main purpose to conduct teleconference with my team. Now this impacts my upcoming tasks to carry on for the rest of the week.
I want to register my dissatisfaction with the product which I purchased in your shop. Finally, I need an immediate replacement of the equipment, ensuring its accessories are in a proper working condition. I hope you understand my situation, and I look forward to your co-operation in getting this resolved at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Submitter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... your shop to support my job from home. After reaching home I installed the required ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd new item not serving the purpose. While discussing with your salesperson I made...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84042553191 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13923534501 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5545634754 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208827693605 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840724397177 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550165813944 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142613343662 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476971680488 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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