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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.In your letterdescribe the problem with the equipmentexplain how this problem is affecting your work

Essay topics: You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do.
Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this to complain about a 'Butterfly' red mixer grinder which I bought in your showroom, last Friday. The main problem is it's not working at level 3 which is the top most speed of the system. Another problem is that the lid of the small jar is very tight, when I open the lid it spills out the mix.

While testing the product in the shop, I did not test all three levels of speed. After reaching home I discovered that the machine is not working at a maximum level of speed, and the smaller jar lid is not fitting properly. This had caused inconvenience to my family since I did not use the item from the date I bought this item. Finally, I need an immediate replacement of the product or a full refund of my money.

I hope you understand my situation, and I look forward to your co-operation in getting this resolved at the earliest.

Yours faithfully,
Submitter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n I open the lid it spills out the mix. While testing the product in the shop, I...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42168674699 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52184533145 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5836234722 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5555555556 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229671204656 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860977631778 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056870586507 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139918224567 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492750586801 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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