Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope, you are doing well today.
I am writing this letter to make you aware of the problems; I have been facing with the laptop purchased from your shop. This laptop isn’t working properly since the beginning and lags too much. First I thought, this might be a software problem and Windows updates will fix it. Now that, all the latest software and drivers have been installed, lagging problem is still there.
I use this laptop mainly for presentations in front of my clients but sometimes it gets stuck in the middle of one and has to be restarted to get the problem resolved. This leaves me embarrassed as well as results in wastage of my client’s and my time. Apart from that, the battery of this laptop also drains very fast and I have to keep it plugged in all the time.
As this laptop isn’t as useful as described by you and has multiple issues, please send someone to pick it up from my office and refund me for it as I don’t want a replacement of it. I will be ordering another laptop as soon as I receive full refund for it.
Yours faithfuly,
Sumit
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, well, apart from, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52216748768 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47437791086 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7770378037 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2116736607 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784785542485 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561521382991 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114488209282 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637675161214 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.