Some people think studying in groups is better while some think the self study is better for school students Discuss both sides and give your opinion

With the growing population, competition in every phase of life is increasing and the sector of academics isn’t untouched by it. To overcome the difficulties with different subjects and to achieve good scores, the students follow different ways of study and group and self-study are considered such modes. While a group of people favors the method of group-study others don’t share the same enthusiasm about the self-study. This essay will discuss both given views and will present a conclusion as per my understanding.
Firstly, the method of group-study is considered one of the most dynamic modes of study. As not all the students may be good at all the subjects, they can help each other out with their weak subjects. Studying in groups also generates a positive sense of competition among the pupils and they are motivated to work hard towards their studies. Moreover, studying through this method, students can get their problems resolved real-time which eventually makes them more knowledgeable.
Next, on the one hand, some people prefer to study in groups and also encourages others to do so but on the other hand, a segment of people consider self-study better. Self- study may be a good method of studying but it lacks some of the virtues of the group-study method. However, it doesn’t mean that self-study is insignificant and shouldn’t be taken into account. Self-study is the best choice of students who don’t feel comfortable in groups as well as are an introvert. Since the inception of the internet, students can find the resolution of any problem without bothering others and can finish their studies speedily.
Lastly, though methods of group-studies and self-studies both have their advantages, their disadvantages cannot be ignored. Even though studying in a group is virtues for students, it can be beneficial only if students are studying. Usually, when two or more friends come together to study, they tend to do anything at all apart from studying. Hence, its advantages convert into disadvantages. Similarly, the fruits of self-study can only be reaped, if students are ready to give 100% of their time to study and to nothing else.
In essence, both of the above-mentioned modes of study are good ways and beneficial. However, students should ensure that they are using these methods honestly. Also, it is somewhat parents’ responsibility to ensure that their children are doing the same and are not being indulged in some other activities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, honestly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16377171216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90274645573 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535980148883 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0632741649 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0952380952 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331895869484 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105338745333 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797709154542 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19181661458 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822555394064 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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