In this era of technological advancements, taking photographs of various places and events has become easier than before. Some of these photographs are so meaningful that they provide an overall view of the story written in a news-paper or being presented in a program. Images are often used by various news-channels and papers to provide credibility to the news; however, they also provide an overall insight of the news instantly.
As they say, a picture is worth a thousand words and I find it entirely true. When an image is used to describe a story, it makes it more interesting and detailed. For instance, when an Indian news-channel ran the news about India’s moon mission and spaceship program, only a few people found it interesting. However, when ISRO started publishing the images of the moon taken by the spaceship on a social media application, it boosted people’s interest in the mission and they started to follow the developments very closely.
Photographs and graphic visuals are also used by various platforms to illustrate multiple issues such as war, human emotions, climate changes, and scientific discoveries, etc. Graphic visuals and photographs are often used to present the effects of a global crisis in an effective manner. A research conducted by ABC University showed that the human mind is more responsive to photographs and visuals rather than written words. Hence, it is proven that images can be used to convey a message to people more efficiently.
In essence, photographs or images become a vital part and have a significant impact when it comes to presenting something to the audience. They are often used to make the presentation more interesting and illustrative. In my opinion, pictures should be used to describe news as they add more credibility to the news as well as leave an impact on people’s minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12459016393 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04597751763 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3912867191 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202957524993 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717863221686 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406966911463 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120172943639 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106901317418 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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