Fashion has become a crucial part of people’s lives. Nowadays, everyone wants to look better for various reasons and aware that better clothing improves their personality a lot. However, should be judge people merely from their appearances? I agree to some extent with the given statement, however it’s not feasible to know a lot about people’s cultures and characters by merely looking at their clothes.
Firstly, in this world of globalization, jeans and T-shirts are becoming popular day by day. In fact, people get used to the modern clothing easily and prefer to wear them more than their traditional clothing. Therefore, these pieces of modern fashion may not reveal anything about wearer’s ethnic roots and culture. However, when they occasionally come out wearing their traditional outfits, not a lot of things but at least something can be learnt about their culture and ethnicity. Even if, people’s religion and ethnicity can be guessed by examining a person’s outfit, it may also be misleading sometimes and might not provide any expanded details about their culture.
Next, if we come to a person’s character and personality, then it undoubtedly provide more details. For instance, if a person’s cloths are dirty and grubby, then it can be said that either the person is extremely poor or does some outdoor manual work or vice versa. However, it may also present an incorrect version of one’s overall personality and reality may be completely upside down.
In essence, clothing doesn’t provide any significant details about someone’s culture and character. Making your moves by judging someone by their appearance may also be misleading which could create confusion and chaos. A person wearing dirty clothes may not be poor. Similarly, a man wearing a business suit may not be a gentleman but a con.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, therefore, at least, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34576271186 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98700431396 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.728795911 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289778506161 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991892676117 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823427092908 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19077306659 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950260802741 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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