Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that clothes or one of the important parts of someone physical appearance. Therefore, some people believe that our garment reveals a lot about us but others argue that people should not to be judged due to their clothes. In my view, wearing styles to some extent can reflect people characteristics and culture but it is not totally true.
To begin with, according to the recent research’s, people who care about their clothes are more reliable than others. Videlicet, It indicates that people garment can have a great influence on others. For instance, statistics show that, in general, employers are more likely to hire people who are neat and organized than who are not. On the other hand, there are some other religious and cultural reasons that make people to wear special clothes. For example, Christian like to wear suits, while Muslims prefers to wear Arabian traditional growns. Or feminist women wear a long skirt to show their believes.
On the flip side, there are a lot of issues which force people not to wear through the way they like or matched with their character. One of those issues is poverty. Actually, if you do not have enough budget, you will not be able to purchase your needs based on your interests and favorites. Or Women, In some Islamic countries, Our first two very scarf and hijab because of the rules of that country, even if they do not believe in them .
To sum up, I believe that our garment can be the first fact to attract others attention. However, we should consider that since financial obstacles and some mandatory rules can impact on the way that we wear, judging others based on their opinions, is not fair .
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...ased on your interests and favorites. Or Women, In some Islamic countries, Our fi...
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...ers based on their opinions, is not fair .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in general, in my view, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77931034483 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48052084737 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.703345626 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210736826215 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663105055892 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611569860105 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126508618622 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575705025246 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.