Shopping is considered one of the most crucial things in modern society. People of all ages do shopping for different reasons. However, it is the segment of the youngsters that are considered as the major contributor to the shopping frenzy. Though shopping for the necessary things is important, problems generate when youngsters start to do this activity to have fun.
Firstly, every youngster wants to look handsome and desire for the most popular clothing and accessories. As the fashion industry is one of the biggest industries around the world, they bring the new type of clothing and accessories in the market constantly. These products get manufactured after a lot of research and based on popularity. Hence, teens easily get influenced by them and go on a shopping spree. Ironically, they see better and more modern clothing and accessories available in the same market the very next day.
Next, with the inception of technology and with the huge investments in the advertisements of their products, industries have ensured to make every single person aware of their products and the young generation is not untouched by it. Moreover, as young people tend to follow film stars and other popular celebrities, a desire to look like them takes over. As they are not as talented as most of the celebrities, the young generation fulfills their desires to be like them by shopping for the gadgets and clothing these celebrities use and wear.
Lastly, this type of shopping frenzy by the youngsters cannot be considered positive anyway. However, they shouldn’t be blamed for this phenomenon altogether as it is also parents’ responsibility to make them aware of the difference between the real and reel world. They should also be taught about the significance of the money and about its productive use.
In essence, the activity of shopping undoubtedly is crucial. However, when people start to take it for granted and start doing it just for fun, it leads them to financial hardship. As the young generation has a developing mind, they cannot differentiate between good and bad aspects of it. Hence, the responsibility to make them aware of the productive use of their pocket money lies with the parents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07123287671 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86744233739 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482191780822 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7043845105 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4210526316 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154710223069 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533984728363 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532444928232 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924793668969 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536876316162 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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