Child labor is an offense in many countries and my country is one of them. In fact, the law requires parents to send their children to school and if authorities find any children aged 16 or below doing any labor, a jail sentence gets awarded to the parents as well as to the employer. In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to work full time as it will cause a detrimental impact on their studies which will lead to the darkened future.
However, in some scenarios we may also find parents who can’t afford their children’s education expenses, hence they encourage them to work at an earlier age to support their studies. For such cases, there are multiple programs run by the government to benefits underprivileged children. As a matter of fact, there are many institute and schools who provide scholarships to such students and if students are extremely bright, they also bear their lifetime education-related expenses.
In other scenarios, few parents want their children to be self-dependent and responsible at a young age. Not for monetary reasons but for these reasons they force them to get a job. Authorities can play a vital role here as well by monitoring that children are doing only a part-time job and their working hours are as per the rules described by law.
In essence, leaving schools to work full time cannot be a good way to start a life. Child labor cannot be justified in any case and shouldn’t be allowed as it ruins the most beautiful part of a child’s life. However, the government should also ensure that all children are getting enrolled in schools to obtain a proper education and not sitting at home idly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...dents shouldn't be allowed to work full time as it will cause a detrimental impact o...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun institute seems to be countable; consider using: 'many institutes'.
Suggestion: many institutes
...hildren. As a matter of fact, there are many institute and schools who provide scholarships to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... In essence, leaving schools to work full time cannot be a good way to start a life. C...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as to, in fact, as a matter of fact, as well as, in any case, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88421052632 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91231452105 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8409691284 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195712945341 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731662829499 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635042498941 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121173091921 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436063174902 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.