In some countries, children under 16 years old are not allowed to leave school by law and get full-time work. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
The governments of certain countries have strictly prohibited child labour and encourage the children to get a rudimentary education by setting a legal age for full-time employment. At the same time, a violation of this rule can result in the imposition of fines and imprisonment in certain cases. This essay agrees that this is a positive development. Firstly, this essay will discuss how this law promotes the economic growth of any nation and secondly, explain how overall cognition and mental health of a child gets improved.
There is no doubt that poverty is reduced by enforcing the law on child labour and making it mandatory for children to pursue education. This is due to the fact that child labour is correlated to a higher level of poverty and poor parents push their children to work to support them financially. Therefore, child labour interferes with the academic ability of a young child. As education is essential for living a meaningful life, the enact of this law increases the literacy rate and paves the way to the significant economic growth of any nation. In fact, the recent study by Times Now clearly shows that the only difference between developed and backward countries is the literacy rate. Hence, this law is certainly for the benefit of any country.
At the same time, the psychological well-being of a child is enhanced when he takes part in educational activities and surrounded by peers. Teenagers develop intellectual and essential life skills such as team spirit by going to schools. Severe working pressure deprives them of basic education and cognition learning. As children are building blocks of any developing country, therefore getting a basic education by law is a fundamental right of every child and overloaded hours of working at such a tender age hinder the mental growth. For instance, New Zealand has imposed a minimum age limit of 16 years to get a full-time job and made it mandatory for this age to be enrolled in schools.
In conclusion, it is a positive step taken by various legal bodies to impose child labour laws and enrollment of students in schools mandatory at a certain age. This regulation will help the countries to develop rapidly and promote the overall well-being of a child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...essential for living a meaningful life, the enact of this law increases the literacy rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00265957447 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80121629915 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515957446809 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1106291037 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.647058824 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188244342598 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631707742093 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039203964323 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12017259624 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424719189183 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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