Food is a crucial requirement for all the living creatures. As humans have the most evolving brains, they have learnt to not eat the same food every day. Hence, it becomes very crucial to the governments of the countries to import different type of food products to keep their subjects happy. However, many thinkers are not satisfied with this phenomenon and argue that people should only use local food products to boost the economy of the country. In this essay, I will review these thoughts from my perspective and will present a conclusion in the end.
There are various countries around the globe, whose economies depend on farming sector and they must export their food products to boost their economies. Apart from this, not all the countries are capable of harvesting all types of crops due to different factors such as different climates and lack of water. Hence, it becomes necessary for a country to import some products to fulfill people’s need of nutrition.
Even though some countries such as India or China are able to harvest all type of crops but they may be unable to produce adequate supply of grains and lentils. Therefore, imports of these products become significant. Similarly, various food products are over-produced in some countries and supply becomes more than demand. So instead of throwing them in garbage, it is always sensible to export them to other needy countries.
Furthermore, environment and economy don’t get impacted by importing products from other countries. It only helps to have better relationship with other countries, which may even lead to far more profitable exports, for instance export of defense mechanism.
In essence, by forcing the countrymen to consume only indigenous food products may not only bring a sense of rebellion but will also harm economy in a detrimental way. In my opinion, government should take initiatives to increase imports and exports of foods products. However, they should also ensure that trade deficit isn’t much to avoid the loss to the local farmers and economy.
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...of rebellion but will also harm economy in a detrimental way. In my opinion, government should take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68577734433 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.554582915 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.117647059 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202142238141 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641052801828 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493685392089 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113538805289 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307311003137 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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