With the growing population, the needs of the people are also expanding. People are getting used to unusual lifestyles such as night shifts and working extra hours. Moreover, to fulfill such people’s requirements, many businesses such as 24*7 stores have embraced the business model which requires their stores to remain open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. This essay will evaluate the benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.
Firstly, the significance of opening the stores for more hours can only be seen mostly in the metro cities. Residents of these cities don’t have a work schedule and they always prefer to work more to make their ends meet. Hence, they require stores, where they could have some refreshments anytime and that is when these shops come into the picture. Apart from this, various pharmacies remain open to serve any sickly people in need and prove their long hours of business fruitful.
However, the biggest positive effect of keeping the shops open for more hours can be seen in the rising employment rate. As the government doesn’t allow anyone to work for more than 8 hours a day, owners of these shops hire more people to work in different shifts, which is a positive scenario especially in a country where the unemployment rate is so high.
Next, though the importance of such shops is undeniable there are also a few drawbacks. As these stores require their staff to work late hours, it raises concerns regarding the safety of the staff especially when they are women. Moreover, opening the shops for more hours also results in running the electric items such as AC and refrigerators for a long time that leads to higher consumption of electricity which eventually harms the environment.
Lastly, though everything has its positive and negative aspects, it is people’s responsibility to make them more people-friendly.
In essence, though business owners keep their shops and stores open for long hours in the hope of more business this routine doesn’t have many benefits expect only a few. Though keeping the shops open for a reasonable time is beneficiary for the people but it is not wise to keep them open all the time only for the handful of the people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96246648794 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69964537641 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495978552279 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.030443349 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285082109976 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934199370076 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655592065956 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153662306833 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595370291414 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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