Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in towns and cities, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in towns and cities, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays youngsters prefer to leave their villages and migrate to big cities in the search for better employment and comfortable life. As mass migration of young generation is happening from small villages to the cities, the old generation is left behind to look after their family homes and fields. This essay will evaluate the issues generated by this and look into the possible resolutions.
As people tend to live in the cities or towns and get used to the comforts they find there, they are much interested in their villages where facilities are not that many. Though, they usually head to their homes in the villages when are tired of living in the cities and search for some solace and peace which they find only in the calm atmosphere of the countryside. However, as their life is settled in the city, they eventually return back to it, while their parents keep staying back.
The mass migration issue has been generated due to the increasing desires of the youngsters as they are not satisfied with their lives in the villages and want to see and experience the new things which are out there. To reduce the migration, the government should put efforts to create jobs in their local areas, so that people could work and return to their homes. The government should also encourage people to start their own ventures in their villages and should also provide supports, training and financial support for these projects. This will also help people to realize their potential.
In essence, migration can be reduced by providing support to the youngsters they need and also by making them understand the significance of the countryside and their own people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...is settled in the city, they eventually return back to it, while their parents keep staying...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89905362776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4801373375 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501577287066 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.53046599 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33396395157 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162390737898 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191806315693 0.0667982634062 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269633024046 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.365777409141 0.056905535591 643% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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