You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letterdescribe the problem with the equipmentexplain how this problem is affecting your wor

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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.

Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter

describe the problem with the equipment

explain how this problem is affecting your work

say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about a Wifi router that I bought from your store one month ago. It stop working immediately and I am unable to connect to the internet. As I work at home and it is totally at halt.

The Netgear CD1705 wifi router bought from your store. It was working well till yesterday evening but it stop working immediately it is not working at the moment. I am unable to find the exact problem. I have tried some basic diagnostic tasks on it but in vain. One of my friend has same type of wifi router, I tried that router here which is working as expected.

I am a freelancer and work from home. My work depend on uninterrupted internet. I working on a lot of projects right now and I have a deadline to submit these projects to my clients. This is necessary for me to submit them on time to retain my goodwill.

I request you to either replace or repair this wifi router within two days.

Yours sincerely,

Muhammad Zubair

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stops'?
Suggestion: stops
...ought from your store one month ago. It stop working immediately and I am unable to ...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stops'?
Suggestion: stops
...king well till yesterday evening but it stop working immediately it is not working a...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... work depend on uninterrupted internet. I working on a lot of projects right now ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48066298343 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45992264873 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0665280148 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9285714286 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192969762013 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681671725591 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332165581135 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104024986917 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291829938771 0.0580467560999 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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