Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree?
When they get bored, youngsters today spend a considerable amount of time on computers for entertainment. I agree with the view that pursuing an outdoor sport should be promoted and in the essay, I will provide my point-of-view with examples.
There are several drawbacks of using computers as a pastime. A common criticism is of violent games and adult content that gets routed to the screen in the form of advertisements, and children are attracted to it. For example, in a simple educational youtube video one can get to see promotions for a condom where half-naked girls try to tempt you. Similarly, violent games, that gets major attention from young lads, are trying to control them via different tasks given to them. Another disadvantage is that the glare from these electronic gadgets, impact the eyes negatively. The above examples support the view that computer use should be limited.
On the other hand, in my opinion, one evident benefit of playing an outdoor game is gaining physical strength since to play any sport, a player, performs a wide range of physical activities. For instance, in a game of Tennis, the player runs a lot to cover the ground and bend and stretch quite a few times to serve and play shots, making the whole body, work in tandem. Another advantage of playing outside the home is that you get to make new friends in the neighbourhood of the same age. Within this group, one can discuss their school subjects also, if in case, any help is required. Hence, games outside homes should be encouraged.
In conclusion, these electronic gadgets pose a variety of problems for kids like violent games, pornographic content, and eyes getting affected. In my view, kids playing games outside has far more benefits such as physical activity and peer group formation. Giving these young lads the opportunity to be physically active and make friends by encouraging them to play games outside is more just, and justice is paramount.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95151515152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71227526226 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.341453964 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259887562546 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780158576542 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502592814207 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14713809813 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266052285439 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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