You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city Write a letter to your friend In your letter Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him her Write at leas

Essay topics:

You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Describe why you are having the party
Give directions on how to get to the venue
Suggest how you can accommodate him/her
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ___,

Dear Alyne,

Thanks for the letter, it was so interesting to read about your new pet turtle and the photos you shared were amazing.

I've one good news to share with you that my younger sister Alyna is getting engaged on 24th March this year and our parents have decided to throw a big party for all our family members and friends. You've to be here and will get a separate invite soon.

The engagement is happening at the Crown Plaza hotel in Rohini. I believe you'll be coming via air, the venue is a bit far from the airport but once you land, you can take any Airport Taxi going towards west Delhi. In case, you are coming by Bus/ Train, you can take a rental car and start driving towards Pitampura and then we can go together to the venue.

I'd really like you to come and be part of this extravaganza since my parents have been generous enough to book separate rooms for both of us at the party venue, so that accommodation concern is also sorted out.

I can't wait to hear from you.

Your friend,
Atul

Votes
Average: 7.4 (10 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...for all our family members and friends. Youve to be here and will get a separate invi...
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... Crown Plaza hotel in Rohini. I believe youll be coming via air, the venue is a bit f...
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...en we can go together to the venue. Id really like you to come and be part of ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...dation concern is also sorted out. I cant wait to hear from you. Your friend, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3664921466 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09445025131 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701570680628 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5970267445 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295937559953 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118194903894 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577348827263 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134467952584 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149603360298 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.