shopping has become a favorite past time for many young people
It is true that a large number of youngsters are turning towards shopping as a preferred hobby. In the essay below we will look towards reasons behind this trend and how we can motivate them to do something more meaningful.
These young lads have surplus wealth owing to their family and don't think twice before spending it. In addition, they don't have any responsibilities on their head so they are not aware of proper use of money. For example, there are many young people who fly to outstation cities just for shopping, since they are bored at home. In case, they would have been having limited resources they would have been more just with their approach. Hence, we can see that boredom is a major reason for buying things in free time.
In my view, it is very important to show the right direction to these young people. There are a lot of activities available where they can put their free time to a better use. For instance, they can be pushed to pursue gym or sports, resulting in manifold benefits. They will get a better alternative for killing time and improve their health as well.
Another prominent reason, in favour of propelling these young people to choose a better way of organising time is to put it for community use with the help of government programs. For example, in the free time they can teach some poor kids and in this case also both will benefit from it. Youngsters will get a way for their timepass offering internal peace since they did something good and secondly poor children will also learn something useful.
In conclusion, we looked at prominent reason of boredom which forces young lads to spend most of their free time shopping and why they should be encouraged to put their time to better use by means of pursuing some sport or teaching poor kids. The responsibility to pursue these endeavours lies with both the young individual and government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is true that a large number of youngsters are turning towards shopping...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...urplus wealth owing to their family and dont think twice before spending it. In addi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e before spending it. In addition, they dont have any responsibilities on their head...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71686746988 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44921564582 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539156626506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7071261897 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204080058247 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074886569994 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633847659176 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115349902716 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432437142499 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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