Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Children need to learn decision making. Although, few individuals think that these youngsters should not have a say in decisions that affect their life since it will create a community where everyone will think about their own. I tend to disagree with this viewpoint and in the essay, I will explain my point of view with examples.
Those who advocate that the kids should not be making regular choices about what to eat, wear, and play may argue that doing so will enable kids to think about their own preferences first and focus less on co-operation and group tasks that might come on later in life. These lads are like a fresh canvas and whatever they learn today will reflect back later. For example, if a girl child prefers and is allowed to wear pink every other day, she might have issues wearing a school dress or doing a job that requires wearing a uniform. In case, the parents of that girl child would have taught her to respect the school or work culture she would have been in a much better position.
In my view, these young lads learn with responsibility. If they are allowed to make informed choices in childhood, it will prepare them to take bigger decisions later in life. With different choices available, they also understand the benefits and drawbacks of each item. For instance, my daughter at a very tender age of five years gets to decide what all we should eat. She is aware of vitamins and proteins of each of the vegetables at home and alternates between them, so both are taken care of. If in case, these youngsters are left out and parents take all decisions they would find it really difficult later in life to make correct choices.
In conclusion, despite the risks of children becoming too self-centric and not co-operating if they are making choices, we must take into consideration that kids making choices have an opportunity to be a confident adult making informed-decisions. Personally, I feel that providing this chance has been more just, and justice in my view is paramount.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to decision'
Suggestion: to decision
Children need to learn decision making. Although, few individuals think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58469649896 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0385543209 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138817609345 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409493920045 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543043004646 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872076849997 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382272378182 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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