On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insura

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about a suitcase that I lost during transit from Amsterdam airport to New Delhi airport. I have always booked travel insurance with your organization to cover any of the mishaps and this time maybe I actually need it.

It was a blue suitcase with four wheels and was approximately 28 inches with additional pockets on the top. It also had a unique yellow color zipper which made it quite fascinating to look at.

I checked in this suitcase with Lufthansa Airlines at Amsterdam airport and I was not able to get it back at New Delhi Airport. I have also raised this issue formally with Lufthansa Airlines and they have promised to look into the matter. I do have the bag tags issued at the Amsterdam airport and can share them whenever required.

I would appreciate it if you could help me understand the insurance claim process since the possibility of getting it back looks bleak. For purposes of quick contact, a reply by telephone would be appreciated.

Yours Faithfully,
XZZ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have promised to look into the matter. I do have the bag tags issued at the Amst...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd can share them whenever required. I would appreciate it if you could help m...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7650273224 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62180074969 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1398634033 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146336007163 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538979819294 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613268322434 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868758220079 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957439665123 0.0580467560999 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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