You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing this letter with regards to the post seen on our company job portal regarding training for six months with regards to revenue management at our company headquarters, London.
Recently, I got promoted as Assistant Revenue manager in our Mumbai based organization. So to enhance my skills and contribute more productivity towards the company, I believe the training which is conducted will be more fruitful.
I spoke with Jade, who is working as a Revenue Executive and she will be handling the work on behalf of me. I will be available on my official hand phone, if she need any assistance.
I would request you to provide my name for training purpose. I assure you that once my training gets finished, I will extend my working hours if there is any work pending.
I will be waiting for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Tim Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... phone, if she need any assistance. I would request you to provide my name fo...
^
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o provide my name for training purpose. I assure you that once my training gets f...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hours if there is any work pending. I will be waiting for your positive respo...
^
Line 14, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response. Yours sincerely, Tim Frank
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75484220157 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1333285045 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2222222222 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193463589323 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763735296715 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532002891307 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972585495894 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517583660375 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.