Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business?
Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays most of the people are turning to become an entrepreneur, whereas some people prefer to be employed in one of the companies and work for specific hours of shift. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and would like to be employed in company than start up.
On the one hand, some of them prefer to start their own business, as they try to replicate other people in line occupation. They tend to neglect the risks involved, if they are self employed. Some people don’t abide government rules and regulations and during the audit, they have to shut down their trade. For example, there are many restaurants which were there in our vicinity and during safety and fire regulation examination, the officials found some of the restaurant don’t practice fire compliance and they turned that business down immediately. At the start of new company, Businessmen have to put down their hard earned money and if they don’t have enough wealth then they have to borrow from financial institutions with higher rate of interest. This could be an debt on the companies if they don’t perform well.
On the other hand, some people prefer to be employed in companies and work for certain hours of shift and utilize their time for leisure purpose. Sometimes, people could be assured that they would be getting paid monthly, if the organization is performing poorly. Unfortunately, working for a company would also be an risk factor. Few years back, many companies has terminated their employees without a notice period, as the companies were in loss.
In conclusion, people have their own thought to be self employed or working in companies. After measuring benefits and drawbacks, I prefer to be a professional employee, to avoid risk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... higher rate of interest. This could be an debt on the companies if they don'...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ly, working for a company would also be an risk factor. Few years back, many compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01355932203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71446908812 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3843063471 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264218857127 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108944614234 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958142790008 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187104068316 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528841156108 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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