Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
It is true that health issues has become common among the people in recent years due to decrease in healthy activities. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences, societies can take some steps to mitigate this problem.
There are several reasons why people are affected by poor health. Firstly, most of the working people are career oriented, such as completing the assigned work in a stipulated time. So, they sit at one place for a longer time to complete the task. Secondly, some of them prefer to travel by short distance by cars or bikes. Lastly, they can be prone to obesity as most of them prefer to eat fast food than healthy food or full meal.
There are several steps which can be taken by government, organizations or people themselves to overcome this problem. Employers could arrange health check-up for their staff on a monthly basis and also organizing health programmes for their employees will be addon. Employers could also allow sufficient time and encourage their staff to have healthy and full meals. Government could encourage people to use bicycle for commuting short distance and also they could organize sports activities where most of them would like to participate.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise among people due to less physical activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05803571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57641118826 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6688178593 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231563746821 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857460519829 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576720135405 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133515939313 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196477901336 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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