You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel manager and say:
• why you need to use this private room
• what you need them to provide for the party
• inquire about the price of the food you are ordering
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the enquiry of availability of banquet hall at your convention centre.
Let me explain you in more detail. We are planning to celebrate my nephew’s birthday in your hotel on 27th December 2019 and the guests we are expecting is around 50 pax.
Furthermore, we will be opting for a Buffet with a kids menu included in it, Room decorations and a chocolate cake with photo of a birthday boy, which needs to be imprinted on it. We would also like to inform you, there are some guests, who prefer Jain food.
We would request you to let us know the availability and send us the Performa invoice which includes room rental, food costing, miscellaneous charges and government taxes. We would also request you to offer some discount if possible, as we regularly held conference at your hotel.
We will await your response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pax' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'paces', 'paxes'.
Suggestion: paces; paxes
...he guests we are expecting is around 50 pax. Furthermore, we will be opting for ...
^^^
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
..., we will be opting for a Buffet with a kids menu included in it, Room decorations a...
^^^^
Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ellaneous charges and government taxes. We would also request you to offer some di...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arly held conference at your hotel. We will await your response. Yours fait...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86163522013 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73145747438 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691823899371 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0018409926 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161395385865 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065590305255 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477941405416 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07855542374 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052889570665 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.