Dear John,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to spend six months working in the head office and please kindly arrange a workmate to handle my job in this period.
The reason that I want to work in head office is the training system which can help me process my job more efficient. Apart from that, I have chance to catch up more complex cases so that could help our team to face a wide range of new projects. The experiences that I gained will profit the whole department in the future.
As you know, my current project has been finished and the new one has not started yet. I already write a handover file which is the other tasks that still ongoing. I believe the file is easy to understand so you can use it as training file directly.
Could you kindly arrange one workmate to handle the other tasks for me during this six months. I will keep in touch with him or her to finish all the tasks and glad to explain everything.
I am so appreciate if you allow me to work in the head office in the following six months and I would contribute all my passion and energy to our department in the future.
King regards,
Joe
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31050228311 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2390731178 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.615714535 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264169151507 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835891513122 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996237205644 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156380073012 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096831355153 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.