You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months.
• Say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Smith,
The purpose of writing this letter is to express my willingness to work in the head office in Auckland, New Zealand for the next six months.
As you are aware that I am doing MBA to enhance my management skills for my present job. As a requirement of the course, I need to attend the training module in Auckland during weekends for a period of 6 months.
At present, I am occupied with only two projects and fortunately one the client is also from New Zealand. I will have an opportunity to meet the owner and try to grab a few more projects from them.
The other project is an internal one which can be handled by Rauf as he agreed to help me.
I request you to kindly allow me to work there and make necessary arrangements with head office for a smooth transition. This is a good opportunity for me to bring more business to the company and this training will improve my caliber which in turn will be beneficial for the company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Ryan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48404255319 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54939322972 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9953568862 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265041398337 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924694177519 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859635111892 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118192296219 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100158475189 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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