Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope, you are doing well.
I am writing this letter to inform you about a training course which I’d like to attend outside of the organization.
This training course includes a detailed explanation of the USA HealthCare program as well as about its usage. This is a 18 hours course which can be attended online or by going to a classroom. One of the crucial objects of this course is; not just to provide theoretical knowledge but to show the real life examples of lives being impacted by these benefits schemes.
As our organization occasionally helps employees financially, who are aspirant to pursue such interests, my expectations are also the same. I understand the importance of my work, I’ have decided to attend this course in my personal time. However, I would request our organization for funding for this course.
Being a Benefits Operations Administrator, this course will enhance my knowledge about benefits sector which will eventually be beneficial for my job. If I’m allowed to complete this course, I am sure it will also help me to work more efficiently.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Sumit Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ram as well as about its usage. This is a 18 hours course which can be attended o...
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Line 10, column 172, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
...eficial for my job. If I'm allowed to complete this course, I am sure it will also hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10659898477 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92598096916 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3098494058 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121439624035 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513129201696 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401432929958 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696393451481 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329991873557 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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