Dear Mr. Brown,
Of late, I have been told that there is a temporary job available at our head office in London. I have also come across in our internal portal about this Internal Job Posting (IJP). I am keen on applying for this potential job opportunity and I request you to recommend me for this position.
There are plenty of reasons why I would like to grab this chance. First, head and major team members from Marketing & Sales team operate from our head office. In recent internal communication it is being said that, the team has brought in new techniques to increase the sales and it helped in gradual increase of company profits. By working closely with the team I would like to expand my horizon and want learn new skills which can be added value in my resume. As a result, I wish to make a career progress. Second, the office has been renovated as a result of this there has been an ample workspace, parking lot and other refreshment areas made available for employees.
Though, I will work in different timezone I have a plan which can’t affect my work. I can stretch my working hours to align with my current responsibilities in work, and I can attend all my business meetings either from home network or from office network. I am sure connecting to company network through LAN wouldn’t be an issue because I work within the company premises.
Therefore, I would like to request you to recommend me for this position as you have good contacts with the managers in head office. And needless to ask please assist me with good feedback by outlining my achievements so far.
Yours sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'career progress'.
Suggestion: career progress
... my resume. As a result, I wish to make a career progress. Second, the office has been renovated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71080139373 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68307308377 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9994444406 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274939803941 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820382960953 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497293438948 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117092404689 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641061208104 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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