Dear Sir,
I am writing to request you for your consideration to transfer me to our Head Office in Dubai for 6 months. This opportunity will enhance my exposure to international markets which will help me in dealing with clients of international stature. I think 6 months should be sufficient to learn the skills required to execute deals with multinational companies.
Let me explain my situation, I am currently handling Pan India operations along with a colleague in the Mumbai office. For an uninterrupted operation of work in the domestic market, I shall handover my current set of responsibilities to my colleague who is well versed with the region.
Could you please request the management on my behalf to allow me this stint at the Head Office in Dubai? So, I can hone my skills and acquire international experience. I humbly request you to arrange for the internal transfer, by initiating a mail request to the HR department and consequently keeping the management in the loop for approval.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Mustafa Rassawala
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16477272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24450723856 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1403224427 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21376077125 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082569863789 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674402365411 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117969031517 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399061868165 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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