Nowadays, teaching the children has become an important task and parents are considered to be the first choice as tutors. There are two main reasons namely: young ones consider their parents as their role models and they trust them.This essay agrees with the statement and will discuss in brief the above mentioned reasons.
Firstly, a child believes that his/her parents are heroes because they take care of their wards in the best possible manner without hesitation. Parents can do a lot of things that the child has to still learn so he/she is amazed with this. For example, the parents are driving, working, completing daily chores, handling finances and taking care of their children etc. This multitasking behavior impresses the adolescents and they want to be just like their parents, hence they watch and learn many things from them.
Secondly, Children trust that their parents will teach them the right things, so that they lead a humble and meaningful life. As a lot of time is spent at home, they learn that their parents love them and want the best for them. To exemplify, a study confirms that children learn better from the teachers they trusted the most. In order to teach the young generation it is important to gain their trust.
In conclusion, parents are best suited for educating the children in not only academic areas but also other areas of life in general. This essay argued that there are two main reasons for that; the primary reason is that, they perceive their parents to be their idols and secondary reason is the trust factor because of which they will follow and obey them. Thus, it will inadvertently cause them to become better teachers than the ones at school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...y, a study confirms that children learn better from the teachers they trusted the most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, for example, in brief, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27382615311 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524137931034 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.136085312 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223127285992 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891782890977 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539087193524 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145208892799 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191355675418 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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