You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to express my interest regarding an opportunity to work in our head company in the UK.
First of all I would like to inform you about my desire to study English in foreign country. So, as we have our head company which located in the UK London I think it will be really helpful and useful at the same time study and work with foreign colleagues.
I of course overthink how I can continue my tasks during this half of a year. It will be very easy to use video conferences and e-mail to still in project apart from destination. Also, I can weekly report you about my achievements.
I would enormously appreciate if you could have the possibility of arrange my opportunity to gain foreign experience and help me with studying English abroad. I look forward for hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Olga Choklia
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to express my interest rega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, regarding, so, still, apart from, i think, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65562913907 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64667115591 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1133868247 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 4.34317383033 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185704189581 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745975005405 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442162213682 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102725566291 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435682453004 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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