Nowadays, for work reasons, many families move to other countries. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this. Others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, an increasing number of people tend to relocate abroad in order to get better career opportunities. Although it can be beneficial for their children, others claim that these children can experience some negative consequences from the relocation. This essay discusses both sides of the argument and then I will give my own perspective.
On the one hand, there are those who advocate children’s relocation to other countries. This is because they can find there better schools or institutions compared to those in which they used to study at their home country. As a result, having graduated from a prominent university, adolescents might be able to be employed by an excellent company and to be paid a decent salary, which can be beneficial for them and for their future family. Moreover, after having moved to other countries, children can broaden their horizons since there are many new people with whom they may communicate and, therefore, acquire new informations and become all-round and versatile people.
On the other hand, some people think that changing a place of living can be detrimental for children. For one thing, while relocating abroad, adolescents lose their friends and other people, be they their teachers or neighbours, who had been very close to them for a long period of time. Consequently, this can lead to the sense of loneliness and homesick, which would most likely cause health problems and some mental disorders. Furthermore, since some countries are known to have different curriculum at school, it can be difficult for the migrated children to adapt to the new school requirements and to keep up with their peers.
In conclusion, I think that both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however, I am convinced that moving to another country might be a good development for children because they would have no other choice but to be competitive people among those who are already live in this country, which can force them to do their best towards their goals. Given the situation, I would no doubt suggest people take their children to other countries and encourage them to blend in with the new society as much as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05785123967 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7762773232 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0238048016 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24176621935 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100677020551 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600518806307 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17936701463 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550029453619 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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