Nowadays, for work reasons, many families move to other countries. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this. Others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a common view that children that relocated to a new country with their parents have more opportunities: they learn another language and widen their knowledge about different cultures. However, I strongly believe that it is rather a challenge because these young travellers need to establish new social bonds, and for some of them it is completely unachievable.
Children that move abroad usually are forced to learn the language of a new country and to broaden their knowledge about its culture and traditions. As a result, these youngsters have more than one active language which results in more opportunities for education and job in the nearest future. Also, they usually are open-minded and can easily fit in diverse teams. For example, Ukrainians that lived in England when they were young usually work in international companies where English is the main language of communication and have many job proposals because they know how to communicate with English speakers in the most efficient way.
Unfortunately, relocation in at a young age is not only about benefits, but also about some drawbacks. Some children lose their friends and are unable to find a new social circle, and it leads to loneliness and depression. For introverts, it is usually hard to communicate with others, so when an introvert children change their school, they are unable to build new relationships. It results in the situation when many young immigrants are struggling with being lonely. To illustrate this, children that came from other countries to Japan are usually isolated because they cannot fit integrate into Japanese culture.
To summarize, the main reason for families to change a country of living is a new job opportunity, and parents try to justify this hard decision by thinking about advantages for the youngest family members. Despite it brings such benefits for young people as a new language, it might result in isolation and the inability to make new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19314641745 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85133364428 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9141288908 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218049091147 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074086205939 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433395369122 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13585628005 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218981061574 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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