In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as
a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose
higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The popularity of consumption junk food in some countries increases significantly that makes people suffer from different health problems. This situation can be change in positive direction due to the government control and force to pay special tax for fast food.
It is well-known fact that in our days we can observe that food business especially fast food is developing with high speed. There is variety of snacks, crisps and etc. in the street’s shops and cafes. Teenagers and even adults prefer this food because of accessibility. In other words, it is easy to buy junk food and eat immediately instead of purchasing natural products for self-cooking at home. Therefore, bad diet like eating fast food influences on human body in damage way such problems with heart, blood pressure and of course obesity.
On the other hand, governments can probably solve these problems just using regulatory conditions. It is obvious that only governments have power to control amount of sales this type of food like fast food. It should be controlled by imposing a higher tax, so perhaps the amount of purchasing junk food can decreases dramatically. Because usually people are chasing cheapness and easy accessibility but, in this case, it is to stop eating so much fast food.
To conclude, the issue of modern health problems which people suffer due to consumption plenty of fast food can probably be solved by government, like the most powerful instrument to control people and business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...eed. There is variety of snacks, crisps and etc. in the street's shops and cafes. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re is variety of snacks, crisps and etc. in the street's shops and cafes. Te...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
... the amount of purchasing junk food can decreases dramatically. Because usually people ar...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owerful instrument to control people and business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, of course, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1646090535 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81473058378 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1002086431 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5384615385 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351153834301 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118558633037 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683996143721 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222922648651 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545639653658 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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