People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals think that there is a direct correlation between people’s age and their shopping preferences. I totally disagree with this statement since people of all ages might want to buy food and look stylish.
One of the main reasons for my disagreement is the desire of people of all age brackets to purchase food. In order to stay alive, all people, be they sixteen or sixty years old individuals, should buy and consume a huge variety of products. Therefore, all of them would no doubt be purchasing meals throughout the course of their entire life. For example, on a daily basis, I observe people of different ages in supermarkets who buy the same types of food, such as bread, milk and vegetables.
Another reason why I do not support the view that people’s shopping habits are affected by their age is because all people may want to look trendy. Being members of society, many people, be they schoolgirls or adult women, have no other choice but to buy modern clothes to look fashionable and to feel confident. As a result, there are many manufacturers of clothes which create their products aimed at people of different age brackets. For instance, my grandmother Liz, who is seventy years old, is almost addicted to buying dresses and shoes as she has still been working for a marketing company and from her point of view she has to look perfectly.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that shopping habits of people vary in accordance with their age because all individuals should buy food to survive and many people tend to buy clothes during their whool life to look modern and appropriate.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87725631769 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74576208463 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.416324897 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172526379027 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767472355776 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606928269538 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124608872332 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366630758449 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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